In the first session of today’s class, I have taken notes of my advantages and disadvantages through reading my feedback from toolbox. Also, I have read my pair’s feedback and seen his portfolio in order to gave him advice on his Toolbox work. And he would did mine.
In the first part of this class, I have read the feedback again as well as taken notes, this gave me a clearer understanding of my feedback. My shortage are:
1: research: more clearer reference to the original research images
2:composing: the customer profile could be clearer that its a real person
3:Composing on design page: actual product could be much clearer and bigger on the page
During the second part of this class, I have learnt a lot from giving feedback to others. I can compare his work with mine and get the idea of which part I need to improve as well. My pair is Crews, I found that there are a lot of interesting collages work that I can learnt from, but he has a lot of improvement space on doing customer profile and shop report. So I gave him so many advice on his work. And my feedback is written by Crews. In this feedback, he gave me a lot of encouragement as well as list a lot of advantages on my portfolio. Also, he gave me his own opinion that I need to make more effort on my work, I will take these advice. This session is so helpful that I could get different opinions on different people. This give me more direction of making effort in the future. And I could also learn from comparing his feedback and work to mine. In order to find the way that I could improve.
Things that I learn form this class is: I need to have more communication with my classmate and work more with them. This will benefit both of us
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